Thesis statement…ooo…thesis statement…

It is true that the most difficult part in position paper is to create a thesis statement. In previous post in this blog, I had said how happy I was that my thesis statement had been approved by Miss Siti. But unfortunately, the delight was vanished once she informed me that it was not approved by her superior. Hm…She said I have to change one word,”inflict” in particular. I have speculated before that this one verb would give trouble as it suggests cause-effect statement, but i thought...why not try my luck. Hehe.. However, here it is, being rejected.
Therefore, I have to reorder the statement, but it is quite difficult. Maybe, I will change to another thesis statement altogether, but since I am very enthusiastic in Emily Bronte’s Wuthering Heights, I think I will still use this text for my position paper.